1. Science can attribute the notion that no two snowflakes are alike, to the work of Vermont farmer
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B. alike, to the work of Vermont farmer,
C. alike to the work of Vermont farmer,
D. alike to the work of Vermont farmer
2. But Bentley made history in 1885 when he produced a
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G. history in, 1885,
H. history in, 1885
J. history, in 1885
3. At this point, the writer is considering adding the following true statement: In the 1600s, Johannes Kepler published the treatise “On the Six-Cornered Snowflake.” Should the writer make this addition here?
A. Yes, because it establishes a timeline for the study of snowflakes throughout history.
B. Yes, because it establishes that Bentley was influenced by Kepler’s work.
C. No, because it detracts from the essay’s focus on Bentley and his photomicrographs.
D. No, because it detracts from the essay’s focus on Bentley’s farm in Vermont.
4. From the time he was fifteen, Bentley used a microscope and examining snowflakes during snowfalls,
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G. examining snowflakes during snowfalls and
H. to examine snowflakes during snowfalls and
J. to examine snowflakes during snowfalls,
5. He tried to document the snowflakes by drawing them,but they tended
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B. and record the six-cornered snowflakes by drawing
C. and record the six-cornered snowflakes by hand-drawing them,
D. the snowflakes, hand-drawing them by hand,
6. He soon abandoned them by hand drawing in favoring photography.
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G. favor of
H. favor for
J. favored
7. To take his photographs, Bentley used a bellows camera, that is a portable camera with a
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B. camera; this being
C. camera—
D. camera;
8. The writer is considering deleting the underlined portion. Should the underlined portion be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it introduces a photographic technique of Bentley’s that will be described later in the essay.
G. Kept, because it establishes that Bentley was an experienced photographer.
H. Deleted, because it detracts from the paragraph’s focus on the quality of Bentley’s photographs.
J. Deleted, because it interrupts the description of Bentley’s camera.
9. putting them on a microscope slide and snapa photo.
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B. putting them on a microscope slide, and snapping
C. put them on a microscope slide, and snapping
D. put them on a microscope slide, and snap
10. To cushion the snowflakes’ fall, Bentley caught them
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G. the flake
H. this
J. it
11. Then, using a feather to transfer each flake to a slide.
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B. He then used a feather
C. Using a feather, then,
D. Then used a feather
12. Per snowfall, he could photograph
F. YES, because it provides specific information about the types of snowfalls Bentley was able to photograph while he lived in Vermont.
G. YES, because it provides specific information that helps demonstrate Bentley’s productivity during his snowflake photography sessions.
H. NO, because although it provides specific information, it indicates that Bentley wasn’t satisfied with the number of snowflakes he photographed.
J. NO, because although it provides more information, it does not provide the exact number of snowflakes that Bentley photographed.
13. This method changed the background of the image from white to black, accentuating the details of the
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B. black and it accentuated
C. black, it accentuated
D. black accentuating
14. Between 1885 and 1931, Bentley repeated this painstaking process, nonetheless producing
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G. ultimately
H. otherwise
J. usually
15. Suppose the writer’s primary purpose had been to write about a notable achievement in photography. Would this essay accomplish that purpose?
A. Yes, because it describes Bentley’s innovative method for photographing an object that had never been captured on film.
B. Yes, because it focuses on the process of snowflake formation and the man who discovered it.
C. No, because it instead describes how scientists used Bentley’s photomicrographs to study snowflakes.
D. No, because it instead focuses on Bentley’s childhood accomplishments in photography.
16. Given that all the choices are accurate, which one best introduces the focus of the essay?
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B. were supported by local businesses as well as foundations such as the Florida Humanities Council.
C. motivated many volunteers from the community to become involved.
D. included completing a historical survey of the town.
17. Given that all the following parenthetical statements are true, which one provides information that is most relevant at this point in the essay?
A. (the town was founded with twenty-seven families and grew over time)
B. (Hurston would later work as a screenwriter and a librarian)
C. (her father served as mayor)
D. (Hurston had seven siblings)
18. Should the writer make this deletion?
F. Yes, because the underlined portion adds general information about the time period that is unrelated to Hurston’s life and work.
G. Yes, because the underlined portion suggests that Hurston is more appreciated today than she was in the 1930s.
H. No, because the underlined portion indicates that Hurston’s work initiated the Harlem Renaissance.
J. No, because the underlined portion helps emphasize the level of Hurston’s impact.
19. Which choice provides the best introduction to the paragraph?
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B. residents had hope while
C. residents, hoping that
D. residents, who hoped
20. Which choice is correct regarding the possessive form?
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G. of its
H. about it’s
J. toward its
21. Which choice provides the best transition into the next thought?
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B. Nonetheless,
C. Moreover,
D. Instead,
22. Which choice is correct regarding the verb tense?
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G. were brought into being.
H. have been created.
J. was born.
23. Which conjunction best connects the phrases?
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B. in addition to
C. but also
D. also
24. Which choice provides the best overall description for this detail?
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G. In the year the festival was launched, the
H. In that first year, the
J. The initial
25. Which choice is correct regarding the verb form?
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B. attracted
C. attracting
D. having attracted
26. Which response most effectively explains the overarching purpose?
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G. After spending months arranging events and coordinating with artists and vendors,
H. With the ongoing goal of promoting African American cultural arts,
J. Although some of the volunteers, like Hurston herself, were not born in Eatonville,
27. Which option best clarifies timing?
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B. in the first month of every year, in January.
C. every January, on an annual basis.
D. annually each year in January.
28. Which choice correctly conveys the meaning?
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G. large part
H. largely
J. partly
29. Which choice provides the best introduction to the paragraph?
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B. According to Miss Lin, not
C. Per Miss Lin, not
D. Not
30. Which option maintains proper pronoun usage?
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G. their
H. it’s
J. its'
31. Which choice best maintains parallel structure?
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B. was witness to
C. had witnessed
D. witnessing
32. Which choice best maintains the flow of the sentence?
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G. though, was a less glamorous art show called
H. though was a less glamorous art show called,
J. though was a less glamorous art show, called,
33. Which choice provides the best introduction to the paragraph?
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B. I wondered where Miss Lin learned about obscure art shows.
C. I thought about all the art Miss Lin had taken us to see.
D. Miss Lin took attendance before taking a seat.
34. Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?
F. States and
G. States. He
H. States, he
J. States; he
35. Which choice best makes clear the request made by Takahashi?
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B. to contribute to the project by drawing
C. each to draw
D. all to draw
36. Which choice maintains clarity and conciseness?
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G. stipulation, Miss Lin emphasized,
H. stipulation, Miss Lin emphasized
J. stipulation Miss Lin, emphasized
37. Which choice provides the best guiding question?
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B. chaperone our examinations:
C. advise our inspections:
D. counsel our surveys:
38. Which choice provides the best transition from the first sentence to the last sentence of the paragraph?
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G. Miss Lin sometimes asked us philosophical questions.
H. There are many different kinds of maps.
J. That seemed simple enough.
39. Which choice maintains stylistic consistency?
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B. While studying
C. I was studying
D. I studied
40. Which choice provides the best subject-verb agreement?
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G. have been
H. was
J. are
41. Which choice provides the best phrasing?
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B. took
C. grabbed
D. handled
42. Which choice provides the best sentence structure?
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G. Angeles, and a
H. Angeles. A
J. Angeles, a
43. Suppose the writer’s primary purpose had been to document the life of an artist. Would this essay accomplish that purpose?
A. Yes, because the essay describes how Takahashi was influenced by his Japanese upbringing and his American experiences in conceptualizing From Memory.
B. Yes, because the essay describes Takahashi’s relationships with artists in America while they collaborated on From Memory.
C. No, because the essay describes the unique method in which a teacher critiques her students’ art projects.
D. No, because the essay describes a student’s memory of an art show that resonated with him.