1. How should the underlined portion in sentence 1 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. heroes, such as,
C. heroes: such as
D. heroes such as,
2. What is the best alternative to replace the underlined portion in sentence 2?
F. NO CHANGE
G. whom
H. who
J. DELETE the underlined portion
3. Given that all the choices are accurate, which one most clearly signals that the paragraph will focus on Sampson’s Revolutionary War experience?
A. NO CHANGE
B. a house servant for many years.
C. tall for a woman of her time.
D. a capable young woman.
4. How should the underlined portion in sentence 4 be revised?
F. NO CHANGE
G. given that
H. because
J. and
5. How should the underlined portion in sentence 5 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. In the fourteen months that Sampson served in the army,
C. Sampson served in the army for fourteen months,
D. Her fourteen months of service in the army,
6. How should the underlined portion in sentence 6 be revised?
F. NO CHANGE
G. one of such
H. such a one
J. such
7. How should the underlined portion in sentence 7 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. their assignment was
C. who’s been assigned
D. assigned
8. How should the underlined portion in sentence 8 be revised?
F. NO CHANGE
G. Sampson’s party
H. Sampsons’ party
J. Sampsons party
9. How should the underlined portion in sentence 9 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. escape, the scouts,
C. escape the scouts,
D. escape, the scouts
10. Given that all the choices are accurate, which one most effectively advances the narration of events in the paragraph?
F. NO CHANGE
G. demonstrate courage.
H. help one another.
J. act quickly.
11. How should the underlined portion in sentence 11 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. She felt weighted down by
C. Weighted down by
D. The weight of
12. How should the underlined portion in sentence 12 be revised?
F. NO CHANGE
G. Moreover, a
H. Instead, a
J. A
13. How should the underlined portion in sentence 13 be revised?
A. NO CHANGE
B. reached up from the deep water and took hold of
C. relied on assistance from a colonial soldier
D. caught the rope
14. Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?
F. pension, which was
G. pension, for which
H. pension. It was
J. pension,
15. The writer wants to add the following sentence to the essay: When she was hospitalized for a severe fever, authorities discovered that she was a woman. The sentence would most logically be placed at:
A. Point A in Paragraph 4.
B. Point B in Paragraph 5.
C. Point C in Paragraph 5.
D. Point D in Paragraph 5.
16. 39.
A. NO CHANGE
B. over from
C. back from
D. against
17. 40.
F. NO CHANGE
G. expert, Patrick Honan,
H. expert, Patrick Honan
J. expert Patrick Honan
18. 41.
A. NO CHANGE
B. them.
C. that.
D. this.
19. 42.
F. NO CHANGE
G. Honan, working at the Melbourne Zoo,
H. Honan, who works with insects,
J. Honan, an expert,
20. 43.
A. NO CHANGE
B. retrieve
C. revive
D. rouse
21. 44. Given that all the choices are accurate, which one offers the most logical contrast to the first part of the sentence?
F. NO CHANGE
G. prospects continue to improve.
H. future remains uncertain.
J. recovery is noteworthy.
22. 45. The writer wants to add the following sentence to the essay: By 2012, the zoo had bred over nine thousand stick insects. The sentence would most logically be placed at:
A. Point A in Paragraph 2.
B. Point B in Paragraph 3.
C. Point C in Paragraph 4.
D. Point D in Paragraph 4.
23. Which choice most effectively leads into the new subject of this paragraph while summarizing a main idea of the preceding paragraph?
A. NO CHANGE
B. telegraphs once recorded literal dots and dashes on punched tape,
C. dashes are less commonly occurring in Morse code than dots,
D. few changes have been made to the code over time,
24. Which choice most effectively leads into the new subject of this paragraph while summarizing a main idea of the preceding paragraph?
F. NO CHANGE
G. flashing a mirror in the sun can work,
H. a mirror can be flashed in the sun,
J. flashing a mirror in the sun,
25. Which choice most effectively leads into the new subject of this paragraph while summarizing a main idea of the preceding paragraph?
A. NO CHANGE
B. Thanks to the efforts of enthusiasts,
C. Though it has fallen from use,
D. Easy to learn and fun to use,
26. Which choice best completes the rhetorical pattern established in the preceding sentences?
F. NO CHANGE
G. news, which, by relaying it, they
H. news, by relaying which they
J. news they relay
27. Should the preceding sentence be kept or deleted?
A. Kept, because it identifies the types of safety instructions that are most common in Morse code.
B. Kept, because it explains the important role Morse code can play in an emergency.
C. Deleted, because it contradicts a claim made earlier by implying that specialized machines are required to relay messages in Morse code.
D. Deleted, because it distracts the reader from the paragraph’s focus on how advanced technologies have replaced Morse code.
28. Which choice best connects the ideas in this paragraph?
F. NO CHANGE
G. however,
H. but
J. DELETE the underlined portion.
29. The writer is considering adding the following sentence to the essay: Even laundry hung on a clothesline can relay a message, with thin and wide pieces of clothing representing dots and dashes. If the writer were to add this sentence, it would most logically be placed at:
A. Point A in Paragraph 1.
B. Point B in Paragraph 2.
C. Point C in Paragraph 3.
D. Point D in Paragraph 3.
30. Suppose the writer’s primary purpose had been to discuss how a new technology revolutionized communication around the world. Would this essay accomplish that purpose?
F. Yes, because it explains how Morse code changed the way people sent messages over long distances.
G. Yes, because it describes how the advent of new technologies rendered Morse code obsolete.
H. No, because it indicates that Morse code today is pursued primarily as a hobby.
J. No, because it focuses instead on the advantages of and continuing uses for Morse code.
31. Which choice best corrects the sentence’s punctuation?
A. NO CHANGE
B. pillar, just a few meters from, the Eiffel Tower
C. pillar, just a few meters from the Eiffel Tower
D. pillar just a few meters from the Eiffel Tower
32. Which choice best corrects the sentence’s punctuation?
F. NO CHANGE
G. large, spray-painted “X,”
H. large spray-painted “X,”
J. large, spray-painted “X”
33. Which choice best completes the rhetorical pattern established in the preceding sentences?
A. NO CHANGE
B. Found in London on the side of a building, a stenciled image depicts a pair of uniformed soldiers
C. The side of a building in London depicts a stenciled image of uniformed soldiers,
D. A stenciled image on the side of a building in London depicts uniformed soldiers
34. Which choice best corrects the sentence’s punctuation?
F. NO CHANGE
G. like. There
H. like; there
J. like there
35. Which choice best corrects the sentence’s punctuation?
A. NO CHANGE
B. whimsy, British-born artist, Banksy,
C. whimsy, British-born artist Banksy
D. whimsy British-born artist, Banksy
36. Which choice best introduces the paragraph?
F. NO CHANGE
G. Initially,
H. At first,
J. DELETE the underlined portion.
37. Given that all the following statements are true, which one, if added here, would best conclude this paragraph and introduce the subject of the next paragraph?
A. Banksy’s stenciled message “Sorry! The lifestyle you ordered is currently out of stock” captures his disapproval of consumerism.
B. Daylight would reveal his creations to a simultaneously outraged and admiring public.
C. This technique was featured in the street art documentary Exit Through the Gift Shop.
D. It is hard to believe that no one has ever been able to get a photograph of Banksy’s face.
38. Which choice best completes the sentence?
F. NO CHANGE
G. the kind that
H. and that
J. while it
39. Which choice most clearly indicates the enthusiasm people had for Banksy’s art?
A. NO CHANGE
B. clamored
C. blustered
D. asked
40. Which choice best completes the sentence?
F. NO CHANGE
G. of their
H. for its
J. of its
41. Given that all the following statements are true, which one, if added here, would provide the most effective transition between this paragraph and the next paragraph?
A. Afterward, only a blank wall stood where Banksy’s art had been.
B. Even in Los Angeles, some of Banksy’s art was washed away.
C. Banksy had assumed that his art would eventually disappear.
D. Still, people had begun to take notice.
42. Which choice best connects the ideas in this paragraph?
F. NO CHANGE
G. whether he is
H. to be
J. DELETE the underlined portion.
43. Which choice best corrects the sentence’s syntax?
A. NO CHANGE
B. actual pieces of buildings were sold by auctioneers
C. actual pieces, sold by auctioneers, were of buildings
D. selling actual pieces of buildings were auctioneers
44. Which of the following quotations attributed to Banksy best suggests why Banksy has not revealed his identity to the public?
F. NO CHANGE
G. “If you want to say something and have people listen, then you have to wear a mask.”
H. “Graffiti is one of the few tools you have if you have almost nothing.”
J. “Speak softly, but carry a big can of paint.”
45. Suppose the writer’s primary purpose had been to explain a common debate about the definition of art. Would this essay accomplish that purpose?
A. Yes, because it demonstrates that characteristics of street art are similar to those found in other types of art.
B. Yes, because it explains why street art is controversial.
C. No, because it focuses on why the work of one street artist has gained popularity.
D. No, because it explains Banksy’s reasons for choosing to create street art.